kdawg freestyles (if you like it, more to come)

[kdawg15]

I stand my ground lyrically bound,
To a mic on my right arm aimin 2 impound,
Then next brotha that wishes ta speed bye,
Wavin' fake gang signs like he simply wavin' hi,
It makes me sick that all these wannabes wanna try,
To testify, I DENY!
Access to my tireless trainin',
As I work on the stage, style drainin',
All the methodical fools frontin' tools,
Screamin' they lay the law make the rules,
Yet they need mad PRACTICE!
TRACK THIS!
I'am the one who drops knowledge in a rage like an angry sage,
Writin' confusin' chapters forcin' fakaz to turn the page,
You lock me in the cage, I JUST BUST YA GAUGE!
I've been work since the age of a juvenile,
Kickin' continuous hotbeats and phat style,
YET YOUR IN THIEF DENIAL!
Walkin' tall yet stolen profile,
And now your in Hell's court, time for the trial,
Your turn to be tested and bested,
Like I was before I rested,
And took on the brothaz on the current rap scence,
Kickin' madd whackness yet clockin' madd green,
I'VE COME TO REIGN SUPREME!!!
Bring forth my lyrical dream team,
DIVINE, MURDA, AND SCHEME!!
So don't forget to avoid the blink,
Stand wide-eyed and think,
Cause my gat reacts faster than your bat,
When its all over,
People will stand above and ask, who was that?
The insane mic rocka,
The fake hoe stalka,

[Nokarot]

I like pie.

[kdawg15]

are you sure you have seen them? i have only submitted them to like 3 wesites, nothing you would be able to find on google

i have never submitted this next freestyle to any websites, so this proves im fa real:


my way wich is the right way, doin 90 on the highway, ridin in the lex, system bumpin the efex, im goin to polish my crome, buy a new home, a masion in the hills, stacks of hundred dolla bills, gettin my fill every day, payed and laid...
im not a gang banga but ill flip you like tito santana.flow masta, kdawg wont miss ya...its like 2 pees in a bucket...screw it, beemer gets a flat ill just junk it...im makin lots of dough, six trillion is my goal, got plantium on the wrist cuz i got hit after hit............

[Nokarot]

Well I edited my post anyhow. I could be wrong, sorry for being a ****.

[kdawg15]

dont worry man. ive been free-stylin for about 4 years now.

[syk0ticz]

we being honest here or just tellin you you are good ? :S


being honest (may be biased dont like rap)

well i like some of it but meh anyways i think your style is too similar to the wannabe "new age" rap artists who are all the same talking about *****es and hoes or what not gettin laid with tons of money and the rides you own.. but anyways ill commend you on coming up with your own ways to imput the same lyrics used over and over by other rap artists who had a big hit and are now no where to be seen for example the game, he was big (didnt like him) for a little while...well atleast in AUS, the only rappers i like are the older style ones e.g tupac, nas etc well tupac was good till he got caught up in the west coast east coast bull**** but anyways you get the point, if you wanna be diff talk about something different, even though it is original to you the lyrics you use are just recycled junk lyrics heck you may aswell sit there with a phat beat playing in the back ground screaming "***** hoe i got milz and yeh im rich..."


just some critism anyways keep it up if it makes you happy dont let no one hold you back from doing what makes you happy :)