Building a chaos

[Raven085]

I know im not normally this mean but i just though i would do something difftent and try to write from a diffrent emotional view ya know?

You see me from far away, and
I can feel your whole being
shaking in hatred; completely uncontrolled

I stare right back at you,
shamelessly, with indifferent eyes

You mean nothing.

But I'll find a way to your heart
I'll shatter it, poison it,
twist it right out,

... and you won't bring me down.

Your powerless thoughts are now useless.

I'll drag you through and under
the irregular, frozen mistakes,
thus every breath you'll forever regret

I'll slowly burn out your soul,
I'll drain you, drop by drop,
until you fully lose control.

I'll be the memory you dread,
the memory you'll die to forget

I'll sweetly destroy you whole.

Through the drowning agony of surrender,
I'll build a chaos inside your head..

You mean nothing.

[BlacKwidoW!]

I know what you mean by writing from a differnt emotional view, I normally dont write poems, (just read and appriciate) but was watching Hustle and Flow one day and decided to sit down and write a gansta poem lol. I just laugh at it now.

but I like it, well done

[Raven085]

I know what you mean by writing from a differnt emotional view, I normally dont write poems, (just read and appriciate) but was watching Hustle and Flow one day and decided to sit down and write a gansta poem lol. I just laugh at it now.

but I like it, well done

Lol thanks hun. :) You should so put your gangster poem up here i would love to read it. :D :)

[Titan]

Thats very good work. Asusual.