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Titan
06-20-2006, 09:02 PM
Today it has come
The pain has came today

The pain for my love
My deep love for this girl
This girl I love O so much
This girl I know

This girl I hold so high above the rest
This girl who sure is better then the rest
I love this girl O so much
I love this girl more then she knows

This girl means the world to me
I live in tear and all I want to do is cry
I want to cry
Cry the pain away

The pain of love
The love I have for her is so strong
The love I wish to give to her for O so long
I love this girl

Shes more then a girl
Shes and angel
An angel who has changed my life
An angel who has brought me life

The tears of love fall from my face
Yet sometimes I feel like such a disgrace
Is loving this girl this much so wrong?

Raven085
06-21-2006, 04:08 PM
Wow I could so relat to your poem... well if it had said guy instead of girl lol. But it was amazing I could just feel the pain in your words.... amazing....

Titan
06-21-2006, 04:11 PM
:o you really think so???

Raven085
06-21-2006, 04:16 PM
Ya I liked it... (Sorry for the errors in my last post >.< ) IT was awsome trust me. :)

Titan
06-21-2006, 04:23 PM
Thank you :o idk anything else to say.