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hondagirl1999
12-13-2006, 01:13 PM
I'm bursting with emotion
And I don't know what to do
My heart feels torn in so many ways
And it's all because of you.

Each night I lay in bed to sleep
But all I do is cry
You've hurt me in so many ways
I feel like I could die.

My hopes, my dreams, my happy thoughts
They have all faded away
And everything would be different now
If only you would have stayed.

I used to trust so easily
But you made me disappear
When you left you took my heart
Now all I feel is fear.

I fear that I might once again
Be caught in someone else's trap
And in the end, alone again
My mind, it just might snap.

Someday I hope to love again
Someone who'll always be there
But for now I can't help but wonder
Oh, why just couldn't you care?

Yeah I know it's really cheesy, I wrote this after my boyfriend and I broke up which was a long time ago, but it's a poem and I wrote it. Hope you like it

Wafer
12-13-2006, 02:47 PM
*tear falls* that was really good.......really really good heheh

hondagirl1999
12-13-2006, 03:23 PM
*tear falls* that was really good.......really really good heheh

Are you being sarcastic???

oreo
03-15-2007, 07:07 PM
it was good.

ALLyKat
04-29-2007, 06:15 PM
That really made tears fall..

It's exactly how I felt about a guy and he doesn't care for me that way.. Everynight I feel like I'm dying laying in my bed, I'd do anything for him, when I cried he'd make me laugh in a heartbeat He was the one who made my heart skip a few beats, gave me tingles in my chest of the warm love I felt for him but now it's gone and all I feel is pain.. I really wish it would all go away. :*(

Adreniline
06-22-2007, 07:03 PM
That was awesome.