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[Titan]

The wind sweeps the plain
The plain which is full of so much pain
Pain for love
Pain from death

This girl I love
I love so much
The pain became love
The love became pain

I don't know what to do
I don't know where to go
I just want someone to help
Help me end this pain

I need to be held
I need a friend
I need the love
I need the love from this girl

[PMS Lady Eve]

it's short, sweet and not easily forgotten. first thing i've read from you titan. loved it. :D

[Titan]

Yea I went un-noticed for a while for a reason. I'm presently in a dark state right now but try to show it being a happy one. :(

[PMS Lady Eve]

I've always been the invisible one, wherever I go. I'm sorry for whatever reason you thought you needed to be unnoticed. Just remember that you're not alone... :/

[Titan]

Na, its ok. You know who I am I had you on my FL and everything on live. I just quit comming around and everything because I was sick and tired of all the stupid drama and everything.

[Raven085]

I thought it was good hun keep it up. ITs best not to let your feelings get bottled up inside trust me. Great poem though.

[BlacKwidoW!]

Sense I've come to these forums I've read a few of ur poems you've posted Titan, you like to use repetition in your style and that really seems to work well for you. Keep up the good work.

[Titan]

Thank you, though I try not to be repititous but it does happen to the best of us. Thank you though.

[BlacKwidoW!]

Thank you, though I try not to be repititous but it does happen to the best of us. Thank you though.

lol yes, agreed. But hey, some of the best poets ever used repetition and it really helps to restate a point that is important in the work.

[Titan]

Very true :) i'm shocked I even got this many responses.