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H2O Turkey
05-26-2011, 06:20 PM
My eyes are the gateway through the hardships treaded.

My scars are the history of the wars I fought.

My heart is living proof I have survived and learned.

The heart grows stronger as my past gets weaker.

There is nothing left in the past.

The only thing remaining through all the hardship is the new hope of peace.

My eyes have not finished witnessing beauty.

My scars have not finished showing history of something beautiful.

My heart is not done telling the perfect ending to the story.

Once the story is told.

A legend will be born.

Not a legend of Darkness.

But a legend of Hope.

End.

(Tell me what you guys think?)

PMS TinkerBell
05-30-2011, 04:08 PM
I think that was very beautifully written :mvsmile:

Pony PMS
05-30-2011, 06:59 PM
That's really good Turkey! :D

H2O Fuelrod
06-05-2011, 12:39 AM
dude you should either write poetry or songs for a living

H2O Obsidian
06-05-2011, 12:47 AM
I liked it :)

xSiLENT21x
06-05-2011, 01:05 AM
Pretty good. Nice job!