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babyburnwithluv
11-20-2006, 02:15 PM
Take me away to somewhere new
A place where I can find solitude
I'll sit on the grass or upon some stones
And I'll finally be safe and alone

Take me away to somewhere afar
A place where I can see the stars
I'll look at the sky and reach for a dream
And maybe my soul will be redemmed

Take me away to somwhere lost
A palce where I can feel the frost
I'll let my tears crystallize and fall
And maybe my sadness wont be revealed to all

Take me away to somewhere true
A place where I can drink the dew
I'll savour the taste of freedom reclaimed
And I'll try to look for something to gain

Take me away to somwhere near
A place where I can abandon my fears
I'll let go of yesterday's tears and sorrows
And I'll open my eyes to a better tomorrow

aimskillz
11-20-2006, 06:20 PM
I feel like this all the timeU__U But being alone is never good. That's why you always got to find someone to turn to when feeling down. Great poem, can't help rereading it over and over>:]

babyburnwithluv
11-20-2006, 06:54 PM
Thank you very much

aimskillz
11-20-2006, 07:47 PM
Just giving your talent the attention it deserves. A great poem deserves great reviews.