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PMS Snickers
04-02-2011, 10:07 AM
Pale red circles stain the white carpet
Remind me of a distraught past
A past full of failures and disappointments
Where society labeled me as an outcast.

Long thin scars strewn across my skin
Remind me of a hurtful time
When my heart was sentenced to sorrow
Without committing a single crime.

Tear stained pages of our wedding album
Remind me of my most painful memory
But I must look forward in to the future
Our love in now a part of history.

Dark red spots cover this razor
Reminding me of the present
Running the blade across the flesh of my arm
Because the feeling of pain is quite pleasant.

The feel of cold silver steel
Foreshadows the end of my pain
No one could understand my situation
Because words are not strong enough to explain.

A soothing flash of pure white light
Shoots from the end of the gun
Ending a life of resentment and hate
I had no one left to help; nowhere left to run.

In the coming days and weeks
Please do not cry for me
I am in a better state of being
I have finally been set free.

by Cyber Saiyan





I could relate to this poem in SO many ways... it's ridiculous!
I love this

H2O Tronic
04-02-2011, 01:31 PM
Yeah... I can relate to this too, but, I'm feeling better now. If you want/need any help let me know.

PMS Snickers
04-02-2011, 08:06 PM
Thanks tronic at least some people understand some of my pain

PMS Mz Salty
04-03-2011, 06:27 PM
I know ur pain darling. And love this poem

PMS Kawaii
04-05-2011, 02:23 PM
I thought this was a poem about RROD :(

PMS Snickers
04-09-2011, 09:25 AM
I thought this was a poem about RROD :(

PROD? I don't quite follow..

ShiftKeyComma3
04-09-2011, 09:30 AM
I'm sure 50,000,000 other people can relate, in all honesty.

PMS Kawaii
04-09-2011, 01:21 PM
PROD? I don't quite follow..

Noo:p haha.. I thought it was about like, an xbox that started getting pale red circles, so it was about to rrod, a poem about the misery of RROD sort of.. :p :mvsmile:

I can't relate to the poem myself, and I hope alot of others can't either, because it doesn't sound like it is a good thing to relate to at all! However I believe people who can relate to it, has learnt alot of valuable lifelessons that I lack!

PMS Snickers
04-09-2011, 02:33 PM
Lol oh sorry
this nerd wasn't wearing glasses it looked like PROD from far way lol..
But I'm pretty sure someone knows what it's like to be disappointed or let down, have your heart broken or been lied to, sorrow, to cry, to feel worthless, to feel hopeless, and to feel like you're nothing but a waste of space