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Shiankhi
11-12-2006, 07:36 PM
I wrote it one day, when I was really upset.
to all those boys;
that are to afriad to make the first move.
to all those girls that feel alone at night.
to all those people that never feel loved.
there's always someone wishing for you to be theirs
and to be with you to make everything perfect.
it may be hard now but be strong.
because later on you wont regrret all those silly love notes.
and think maybe you should of told her how you really felt.
the road ahead wont be easy
but it sure as hell will be fun if you have
those that love you to guide you.
i believe everything happens for a reason.
im not a perfect girl
and my hair dosent always stay in place.
i eat when im bored
and i spill things alot. im pretty clumsy and
sometimes i have a broken heart.
my friends and i sometimes fight
and maybe some days nothing goes right.
but when i think about it and take a step back.
i remeber how amazing life truly is and that maybe.
just maybe i like being unperfect.
right beneath the make-up and behind the smile
im just a girl who wishes for the world.
she smashed the rearveiw mirror with her fist
because starting today shes never looking back
shes so tired of pretending everything is ok
her tears are starting to show and her smile is fading away
just turn up the speakers.
so we can sing like rock stars and dance like were famous.
cause we are just silly little girls who fall for stupid boys.

r33hash
11-16-2006, 05:06 PM
its good. chocked full of emotion. but at the end, it switches perspective suddenly. you go from "I" to "she". just an obvious transition I thought I'd point out.

Good stuff though chica.

Shiankhi
11-17-2006, 08:38 PM
Thanks doll. :)

Athena Twin PMS
11-18-2006, 12:00 AM
Nice piece! :)

Shiankhi
11-19-2006, 07:22 AM
Thanks girly! :)