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CaptainDemon
10-09-2006, 07:14 PM
"Memories"

Have you seen the face of your mind?
Gone back to olden times?
Seen dreams float to the top of your head?
Reminded of old friends and pets, now dead?
These are memories my friend,
and they will flash before your eyes before the end,
hopefully I'll be able to gaze one more time
into those pools of emotion you call eyes,
I keep mine open all the time,
seeing is possessing, and everything is mine,

I keep my ears out sharp so I can hear the whistling wind
Hear those words you said when it was quiet
and when the lights were dimmed,
I hear the whistling wind
too long my thirst had gone unslaked
too long ago my heart had been staked
I do not lie, make no mistake
memories are all I have

and I hear the whistling wind,
the wind I heard so long ago,
carrying those words you said too me that time before
you said you love me,
but death won't let me say

how I love you more.

PMS Kahlo
10-27-2006, 08:34 PM
"Memories"

hopefully I'll be able to gaze one more time
into those pools of emotion you call eyes,




Awesome line. Great work! :)

CaptainDemon
10-27-2006, 08:45 PM
thank you, it's been awhile since anyone's commented my work, I was wondering if people still visited this section.