naturaL)
03-10-2010, 11:32 PM
a robot wouldn't save you
inside human nature, i make a mistake.
in result a heart i have ached.
mend you fold you, bend you hold you
you will never fit in this closet of mine.
giving up only makes me want you more,
still i give in
you win.
a mistake, behold.
your future will unfold.
no changing now
no looking back
we're staging out
the life we had.
so before you refuse to untie this knot
realize, i wouldn't have hurt you if i were a robot.
i would have calculated results before hand,
come to the conclusion that you were worth more than,
late nights with a body abscent of mind.
i have concluded i regret it this time.
i lashed out the other inght and ended up writing some poems, here is one of the few.. each inspired by its own events.. i usually try and make my poems a little funny and kiddish when they are feeling a bit too serious.. might post more up l8r =D!
feedback please.. i've never really written poems before.
inside human nature, i make a mistake.
in result a heart i have ached.
mend you fold you, bend you hold you
you will never fit in this closet of mine.
giving up only makes me want you more,
still i give in
you win.
a mistake, behold.
your future will unfold.
no changing now
no looking back
we're staging out
the life we had.
so before you refuse to untie this knot
realize, i wouldn't have hurt you if i were a robot.
i would have calculated results before hand,
come to the conclusion that you were worth more than,
late nights with a body abscent of mind.
i have concluded i regret it this time.
i lashed out the other inght and ended up writing some poems, here is one of the few.. each inspired by its own events.. i usually try and make my poems a little funny and kiddish when they are feeling a bit too serious.. might post more up l8r =D!
feedback please.. i've never really written poems before.