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CaptainDemon
09-12-2006, 07:28 PM
"the Lie"

Sugar and spice,
everything nice,
makes a girl who ends up
disloyal, cheating on you thrice (three times)

Love, makes me feel stupid to say
you are all naive!
when the sun sets at the death of the day,
watch as mud takes the place of where there was clay

what could be formed, what could've been beautiful
watch in melt into the ground, returned to where it was
and I'd be lying if I said I wasn't a fool,
having been used more than an old mechanic's tool

This lie, the world ecompasses it,
pass judgement on me will you!
pass judgement on yourselves!
for you say you won't judge, but you lie through you crooked teeth!

You judge, you look with hateful looks
cheapskates and liars, burlgars and crooks!
I only gave, and gave, and gave
nothing in return, my skin hanging on a hook

cause theirs nothing beneath the surface,
is there?
who are you to be different, do you dare?
or is it that I no longer seem to care

about you, about her, about us,
about life, about death, and if I ****ing cuss
here's a poem for you

Love's folly, a lie as you lay in the field of deciet
and everyone can just **** off, of corruption you all reek
and so you find what you came to seek
nice guys finish last, and cold ones are always alone

but it's not a difference there
it's just how long the nice guy stays ignorant.

CaptainDemon
09-13-2006, 06:38 AM
I'm sorry if my truths about love aren't the candy-colored version of love ya'll got stuck in your heads since the love story was invented. This is my truth though, and I wanted to make sure it got seperated from the lie.

CaptainDemon
09-13-2006, 02:59 PM
perhaps I'm being hard on myself, maybe others. All I know is that it seems I get set up to be joked on or hurt in some way everytime I stick my head out, or when someone else puts me out there for me. I'd rather they leave me alone, cause why bother trying if all I'm gonna get is sadness and anger?

Do not judge me on this. For once I'm not being pathetic and I'm actually being strong about this, I'm not mad at myself, I'm mad at the world for being the way it is, and shoving blatant lies in my face to cover the truth. Size does matter, being a nice guy doesn't, survival of the fittest, not the one who can write a poem.

Conviction
09-13-2006, 03:10 PM
"the Lie"

Sugar and spice,
everything nice,
makes a girl who ends up
disloyal, cheating on you thrice (three times)

Love, makes me feel stupid to say
you are all naive!
when the sun sets at the death of the day,
watch as mud takes the place of where there was clay

what could be formed, what could've been beautiful
watch in melt into the ground, returned to where it was
and I'd be lying if I said I wasn't a fool,
having been used more than an old mechanic's tool

This lie, the world ecompasses it,
pass judgement on me will you!
pass judgement on yourselves!
for you say you won't judge, but you lie through you crooked teeth!

You judge, you look with hateful looks
cheapskates and liars, burlgars and crooks!
I only gave, and gave, and gave
nothing in return, my skin hanging on a hook

cause theirs nothing beneath the surface,
is there?
who are you to be different, do you dare?
or is it that I no longer seem to care

about you, about her, about us,
about life, about death, and if I ****ing cuss
here's a poem for you

Love's folly, a lie as you lay in the field of deciet
and everyone can just **** off, of corruption you all reek
and so you find what you came to seek
nice guys finish last, and cold ones are always alone

but it's not a difference there
it's just how long the nice guy stays ignorant.

If you honestly made that, ur VERY talented.

CaptainDemon
09-13-2006, 05:39 PM
yes, I did make it. If it's so well-written that people doubt it's authenticity, then perhaps I am a good writer.

WearyGamer
09-13-2006, 07:34 PM
nicely done demon. i like it

CaptainDemon
09-13-2006, 11:53 PM
thank you for the comments, simply temporary feelings based on past events. Old wounds, reopened, so to speak.

Limafoxtrot
09-14-2006, 08:12 AM
Good stuff Demon - I hope the old wounds heal up.

CaptainDemon
09-14-2006, 04:46 PM
healed as far as I'm concerned. In my life especially old habits have a tendency to flair up and be just as simply put down, particularly those in the area dealing with love and friendship, or even more specifically heartache and betrayal.