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Lil Kos
09-09-2006, 10:01 PM
This is my first and prolly my last but here it goes

My life has become my Nightmare
My head has been spinning in ways that before I couldn’t imagine
If I could I would forget all the things that I have gone these past months thinking about
When I am just about to forget I am reminded of you and what I thought we had
Only God has seen what I have been through and the never ending torture
I have been taken over by a Nightmare
This is now my life

CaptainDemon
09-09-2006, 10:48 PM
for the first poem you've written, well done.

Lil Kos
09-10-2006, 03:08 PM
One guy i know wants to use it for a sig hes making ;)

JennyPoo
09-12-2006, 04:27 PM
wow Jeremy wow how deep and beautiful! Nice first poem :p