poem

[tecate388]

let me know what you think of this poem...
i need honest feed back i wrote it last night...


Sometimes at night, when I look to the sky,
I start thinking of you and then ask myself, why?
Why do I love you? I think and smile,
because I know the list could run on for miles.
The whisper of your voice, the warmth of your touch,
so many little things that make me love you so much.
The way you support me, and help with my emotions,
the way that you care and show such devotion.
The way that your kiss, fills me with desire,
and how you hold me with the warmth of a blazing fire.
The way your eyes shine when you look at me,
lost with you forever is where I want to be.
The way that I feel when you're by my side,
a sense of completion and overflowing pride.
The dreams that I dream, that all involve you,
the possibilities I see and the things we can do.
How you finish the puzzle that lies inside my heart,
how that deep in my soul, you are the most important part.
I could go on for days, telling of what I feel,
but all you really must know is my love for you is real.

[PMS Fedaykin]

gheeeeey. lawljkjk

[tecate388]

i fluffing hate you hahaha you would post when im in party chat with you

[H2O Snowman]

zomg. rawr

[tecate388]

wtf i said serious comments only hahaha

[PMS Fedaykin]

cock of doody 4 morin wurfurrrr


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EcNse_7dklc

[tecate388]

i hate you both that has nothing to do with the poem hahaha

[Target]

gheeeeey. lawljkjk

i thought Fedaykin had a good point... very good constructive critisism. :mvsuprisehug:

[tecate388]

:( you all are so mean to me

[CheezCracka]

well i'm not mean..
It was very good..

[tecate388]

thanks :)

[naturaL)]

you warmed my soul

[tecate388]

lmao natural you crack me up

[naturaL)]

not even joking broseph

[tecate388]

well your welcome haha