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PMS Miss X
06-15-2006, 03:36 PM
These are from a long time ago :-)

With the Rising Sun
By: Jennifer McCormick
Monday October 30, 2000

My life is almost over, its all coming to an end
I can feel the world around me, starting to spin
I fall into a dream, a dream of my past
All 16 years from the first day to the last
I walk up to the water, staring at me face
I turn away quickly, my looks are a disgrace
My fear of death is gone, my will to go now stronger
and I know each step I take, is a problem I face no longer
I step into the water, the coolness peirces me
but I think nothing of it and move forward in the sea
I close my eyes and continue,quicking my pace
I begin to realize how my life was such a waste
I ask God to forgive meand throw my arms in the air
I look at the world around, the world where no one cared
The water climbs deeper and deeper to my chin
But this will be the last, the last that I will sin
As I take my last breath I know my grave is in the sea
Putting up no fight, the waves quickly capture me
I feel like a rag-doll being thrown from wave to wave
At this moment I realize my life cannot be saved
My lungs are full of water and I hear not a sound
My body is like a brick as I sink to the ground
Im sad it had to end but I'm glad that its done
My last breath was taken with the rising sun.





Breathing Death

Jennifer McCormick

You suck it up as though it is the sweetest most savoring taste to ever
touch your lips. Your heat beat stops. The amazing bliss causes your
entire body to freeze as though you would never thaw.Then all at once
a shiver runs down your spine and a drop of cold sweat hangs from the
tip of your nose, swinging until it drops on dry open lips. You lick it away
and the salty taste it gives you cause your lips to pucker and eyes
to narrow as though this is the first time you had ever seen light. You
open your mouth longing to find this taste again and it is not there.
Nothing is. Your eyes close, your mind stops, your heart beats one
last time and finally it is done.



Lusting for you

Jennifer McCormick



I know you here beside me
I feel you all around
the evilness that haunts me
and sends me to the ground

The way you move your spirit
you taunt my lusting eyes
but when I reach to find you
me eyes have been despised

My body is so willing
my eyes they freely give
my heart it lust for passion
my soul it helps me live

Reaching for you and finding
is the best thing I've ever done
But when my heart feel inside you
I knew the devil had won.






I HOPE YOU ENJOY :-)

P.S. If you sumbit your poetry on poetry.com they will copyright it for you. For those of you who haven't done that. It always a good idea to keep track of where it is posted on the internet too.
SO if someone wants to post one of these somewhere else I dont mind but please let me know ahead of time thanks!

Raven085
06-15-2006, 04:18 PM
Wow girly! You should so write more often! Lol It was awsome i did not know that you wrote poetry! OMG lol. But ya it was amazing girly. <3

PMS Miss X
06-16-2006, 01:38 PM
Thanks so much. Yeah i have been writing for a while. I love it!! Im in college right now.. taking some writing classses... i dont think im going to make it my career even though thats what my mom is begging me to do!! Well see though

thanks for the compliments!! <3

Maverick
06-16-2006, 06:15 PM
Wowwwwwwwwwwww omg those were GORGEOUS. Props girlie, keep em coming!

PMS Miss X
06-17-2006, 09:17 AM
hahaha thanks. I will post some more in a few days... they take a long time to type when you dont already have them on the comp!!

H2O SkywalkerX
06-17-2006, 10:50 AM
wow great job.

i really like "with the rising sun"
really touching, i loved it :)

PMS Miss X
06-17-2006, 11:25 AM
thanks so much!!

PMS Miss X
07-07-2006, 04:25 PM
shameless bump because i just want peoples opinion. Dont be haters :-)