Invisibility

[PMS Panther]

Invisibility
Why so keen?
Why is it that I cant be seen?
Is there something wrong with me?

Or Do You just not care?
This is really not fair
I try to get you to notice me
But You Just walk on by

Like Im a fly
Why cant you even say hi?
Well You know what,Im just gonna say bye
Im not even going to try

I know It probably really bad...this is like my first time doing this...and I know its really short but ya :o

[lx CAMOCHICK xl]

OMG I liked the words you used in it :)

[PMS Panther]

awww...thank you camo <3

[PMS Slayergirl]

wow that is great i like really alot. Thats the way I feel right now.:(

[lemons13]

i love the way you said it.....when i read it i can't really tell what the person is feeling

[xi Apocalypse ix]

Nice poem, I like the way you wrote it. Cool

[PMS Panther]

aww thank you guys who commented...you are all awesome!!!...and slayer..yeah thats the way i feel to..:(