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CaptainDemon
08-14-2006, 12:21 AM
"Your My Only World"

I'd wait here forever
just to see you again
forever's been a long time
but I'd wait it again

Only for you
I've got no choice
you speak my happiness
with your beautiful voice

without you near
I'm in pain
you've got me waiting
on memory lane

each and every good moment
and every untold secret
it's a matter of love that keeps me here
not a matter of regret

as I'm here, waiting for you
I find that I love you
best friends forever
But I'd wait two forevers to see you again.

/end

Dedicated to: Alena "DemonGurl"

Written By: William Vidal (DemonFlameX so there's no confusion :p)

Raven085
08-14-2006, 07:45 AM
That was hearttouching hun, I have goosebumps..... Amazing.

CaptainDemon
08-14-2006, 03:21 PM
Raven you are far too good a critc for me, I really am blessed :)

PMS Chocolate
08-14-2006, 03:22 PM
wow . . . that poem is just what i'm feeling right now . . .

it's really, really good

nice find

CaptainDemon
08-14-2006, 04:57 PM
^wow, it's not a find, I wrote it :p

PMS Chocolate
08-14-2006, 06:46 PM
^ oh!!!!! my bad . . . you're good!

JEEZ! sweet writing skillz :)