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Raven085
08-11-2006, 02:14 AM
Your guidance shines like a bright light,
Your strength, gives me the hope
That when I'm lost, I'll find a way
To be able to cope.

But isn't that the point, dear man?
See, isn't that my right?
If something happens, who will be
My shoulder, through the night?

Everybody needs someone
To help them through the pain.
Partners hold our hands and try
To help relieve the strain.

But foolishly, my heart wants you
So how can you support?
It's when I need, not when you can,
At least, that's what I thought.

I only want to see it through.
I need to understand.
I need to find a way to deal with it.
Please hold my hand?

PMS Panther
08-11-2006, 02:25 AM
Wow Wonderful poem Jordan..I liked it :)

PMS Slayergirl
08-11-2006, 08:13 AM
Man thats really good.

PMS Miss X
08-11-2006, 10:35 AM
Ill hold your hand raven <3 LoL
nice poem :-)

Raven085
08-11-2006, 05:18 PM
Aww thanks you guys!!! <3! PAnther yourawsome chica! And SlayerGirl thanks too I have never se ya around nice to meet ya. :)

PMS X!!!!! <3!!! Lol yes we can skip through the flowers together!! Lol *Starts skiping* :D

PMS Miss X
08-11-2006, 05:23 PM
STARTS SKIPPING AND SAYING woot woot!! LoL

Raven085
08-11-2006, 05:34 PM
Lol yes!!! We are flower skipping Ninjas!!!! :D Awsome. <3 Lol

WearyGamer
08-11-2006, 06:14 PM
that was a good poem. nicely done

JAY R0CK 71
08-11-2006, 11:30 PM
good poem