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H2O Creation
07-19-2008, 10:51 AM
I held her touch so close to my mine,
The thought of absence came without a sign.
Her blood within lost all motion of sight,
This had drawn to a pace of stillness that had darkened beyond our life.
My longing desire had forgotten its truth,
Which become stronger in self pity for the timeless events that had laid down before.
The memories of nostalgia, the joys that could not persist,
But it would last forever in time as my life unravelled without to exist.

The warmth that filled her heart so strong,
rooted through our bitter song.
Most souls were blessed within her mist;
she made the devil fulfil no twist.
I saw no pain in this dear fight,
with her flawless love I held so tight.
To the blossoming rose, that would give into the bee.
Life would continue like the flow of a river going to sea.
Put to rest with the boat man near,
Her touch so close, I had no fear.

by hybrid 2008

Draco88
07-21-2008, 11:11 AM
I wish that i could write that good. I have always been bad at writing English. Which is strange because i have been able to read at a college level since 2nd grade.

H2O Creation
07-22-2008, 12:51 PM
i was terrible at writing when i left school... it frustrated me so much, but now i'm getting older it just seems to be falling into place... better late then never i suppose...

Draco88
07-22-2008, 01:00 PM
my writing just stays the same no matter what i write about.