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Raven085
08-01-2006, 03:51 PM
Finite words express a thought
Of what is now, and what is not
Ever changing rearranging
Ideas that we have brought
Infinite possibilities
Woven into memories
Mysteries they unfold
As revelations told
A heart revealed
Or emotions concealed
Blessed or cursed
Or unrehearsed
Spirit's not still
Blood on the quill
Soul and heart
Not far apart
Words written to read
Beautiful indeed
Poetry it is said
Is forever red
CaptainDemon
08-01-2006, 03:53 PM
That's very well done Raven, best I've seen from you actually. You'll have to forgive me though I don't look at the poetry section as often as I used to.
Still, I loved it.
Raven085
08-01-2006, 04:04 PM
That's very well done Raven, best I've seen from you actually. You'll have to forgive me though I don't look at the poetry section as often as I used to.
Still, I loved it.
Aww thanks hun I know you have alot on your mind but your words are always important to me. Thankyou hun.
oXKryptoniteXo
08-01-2006, 08:15 PM
great words jordan, there very descriptive i loved it!
oXKryptoniteXo
08-01-2006, 08:15 PM
great words jordan, there very descriptive i loved it!
Titan
08-02-2006, 08:07 PM
Raven whenever I come to the forums which is rare anymore I just have to read your posts. THey are awsome. Srry I haven't gotten to play much with you, just been on FF XI alot. But again your amazing at writing.
CaptainDemon
08-03-2006, 05:24 PM
Titan, what about me... hahaha. I rarely see any of you guys anymore, though I recently talked to Sonik, he's disapeared again though I think.
Seriously though Raven, it was a lovely poem, and such a good one I had to comment on it twice :D