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Raven085
07-25-2006, 11:08 PM
Colors swirl around me
blinding to my eyes
Tarnished by the darkness
embedded by your lies

My once bright and shining world
lost within the black
As my heart flounders under
the weight of your attack

Watching the orange and yellow's
fading to angry red
Cast into this hateful life that's
now painted up with dread

Searching all the boundaries
for wisps of pink or blue
Just anything to challenge
the void I'm falling through

But there are no colors to save me
so here's to my demise
As I watch this vacant world
through color blinded eyes

Aqua_Babe
07-26-2006, 01:54 PM
dang jordan that was amazing, great poem girly

H2O Default
07-26-2006, 02:25 PM
crazy good.. bit depressing though. Maybe you should write one about the easter bunny or something , that would cheer people up. :D

PMS Mikotyzini
07-26-2006, 06:45 PM
I still don't understand poems Jordan! You'll have to explain them to me. It sounds awesome though! How many poems do you write, anyway?

icy
07-26-2006, 06:45 PM
absolutely beautiful, as usual.

Raven085
07-27-2006, 01:38 PM
Dlharper007: Aww thanks girly yur too sweet!!! *hugs*

Miko: Lol Miko your such a nucca!!! But I love you lol I will try to explain everything to you sometiem hopefully over oblivion soon ya know? And umm I have over 82 pages of poems soo ya... ^.^ lol

Entropy: Umm I have some... but like i dont write too much when im happy mostly sad it helps get everything out ya know? But I will try to make the next one a little more happy.

Thrash U: Thanks sis love you to pieces!!

CaptainDemon
07-27-2006, 04:25 PM
Dlharper007: Aww thanks girly yur too sweet!!! *hugs*

Miko: Lol Miko your such a nucca!!! But I love you lol I will try to explain everything to you sometiem hopefully over oblivion soon ya know? And umm I have over 82 pages of poems soo ya... ^.^ lol

Entropy: Umm I have some... but like i dont write too much when im happy mostly sad it helps get everything out ya know? But I will try to make the next one a little more happy.

Thrash U: Thanks sis love you to pieces!!

I've still got more poems than you :p

Just kidding, I love your poems Raven.