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Maverick
06-14-2006, 04:08 PM
Faced with every challenge known to man
I don't know how much longer my hope will stand
I been standing near the edge & it looks like I might fall
I been thinking I should jump- and no one cares at all

Don't you pull it is what they say
Don't dare jump is what they pray
They don't even stop to think
I can't live another day

Hidden depression
Faking my pleasure
You don't even know the difference
You're blind to the way
That I am
This is my last stand.

Don't you pull it is what they say
Don't dare jump is what they pray
Do they even stop to think
I could end my life today?

Pirate
06-14-2006, 04:10 PM
..gr don't give meeeee the words but post it >:O

Raven085
06-15-2006, 05:15 PM
Amazing poems girly you should honestly write more ofthen. I love to read your work keep it up.

PMS Miss X
06-15-2006, 05:17 PM
i <3 that poem. It is always such a gift to be able to make others feel emotions only you could understand. nice work!

Maverick
06-16-2006, 07:12 PM
Thanks ladies :)