Looking Back

[Raven085]

I would always stand by your side
When you cheated, when you lied
I'd be so hurt, but you didn't care
When confronted, you'd just stare

I never did lose hope in us
Even if we had no trust
I'd just smile and say I'm okay
And let you go on with your ways

I've heard the things you said
All about how you wish I were dead
And how I was so mean to you
Even though hell is what I went through

I was always faithful, there was never another
I was always there, and never further
I believed you over everyone else
But alone is how my pain was dealt

Even through the bad, I remember the good
But now she's there, right where I stood
I love you, still, and miss you too
But there's nothing left for me to do

[The One and Only Lovable]

beautiful like always. very good raven. i missed reading ur poems

[Raven085]

beautiful like always. very good raven. i missed reading ur poems

:eek: OMG I have not heard from you in forever!!! *Tackels and hugs* Like how are you chica!!! :D

And thankyou for the post on my poem!! :D

[Unknownspartan]

nice poem:D

[PMS Panther]

You are a very great poet...i loved this poem!!

[SilentBow]

yes this iz a very good poem.

*-sigh-* my ex never said anything bad about me to my face but everything else iz something that i went through.

Now that i broke up with him, he wants me back. He tryin hiz hardest but wats fny iz that wen we were together, he wud play me, lie, and everything else u think. damn nice poem gurl :o

[JAY R0CK 71]

i like the way its written. the last part makes it powerful. it makes me remember it you know? good poem. and keep writing. its good to share your writing

[Raven085]

Silent I understand comepleatly... my ex is doing the same thing or he was.... and I dont think any person should have to be in a relationship like that it just hurts you.... But I love ya chica. <3

And Thanks Jay Rock I always try to do my best it makes me happy to find out that people like what i wright, even though some of it is sad. :) Thanks everyone.