Bubbles

[oXKryptoniteXo]

Bubbles


There's something very spatial
about bubbles pale and playful
empty planets on the run
rise to meet the deadly sun
kiss the breeze,
dive by trees
with a tickle,
cause a sneeze
squeaky clean a bubble is
whether soapy or gin fizz
a brief visit,
sharp bend
then suddenly,
the end.

One sweet splash of rainbow run,
a lick and split of lively fun
so nearly gone before begun, that
I have never tired of one.

[Marines]

Nice rhyming. It is cool poem. It has kind of a gothic feeling to it and a joyful feeling,too. But thats just me. Anyway, Good Job on the poem.

[icy]

bubbles! I loved it.

[H2O Soulja]

I feel so lifed up after I read that, nice poem, make another... this one is really good...

Dren`