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CaptainDemon
06-14-2006, 12:01 AM
"Born Again"

Memories wiped away,
evil acts plague the love that flew so happily,
and now the old suns have set,
but suns have a habit
of coming up on you again,
and rising brighter than before,
and there's no mourning in the setting sun,
for like the phoenix it is born again from the ashes.

Gypsyfly PMS
06-14-2006, 12:25 AM
Really well written for such short notice. Like the imagery of the phoenix.

PMS Lady Eve
06-15-2006, 05:29 PM
with one sweeping hit, demonprince is back! :D

CaptainDemon
06-15-2006, 06:19 PM
did anyone notice the line "there's no mourning in the setting sun"? Mourning = morning, as in when the sun rises? It was unintentional but I love that line.

Very sorry for being a bit egotistical.