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Dekine
07-03-2006, 01:50 AM
Couple of sigs I made in the last day or so.
http://img105.imageshack.us/img105/9355/deniserichardstag6rb.png

I couldn't have made this one without Gav, the original stock was black and white, he colored it for me. Thanks again!!
http://img363.imageshack.us/img363/3436/godfathertag5ah.png
comments?
Apoth3osis
07-03-2006, 12:25 PM
Good Stuff :D
I like the first more than the second though. In the second, to me anyways, there is too much spattering, (esp. on "Mr. Brando") and it doesnt seem like there is a focal point... so I guess what im trying to say is that there is just "too much", if that makes any sense.
Dekine
07-03-2006, 12:40 PM
i dont understand how there isn't a focal point of the godfather tag. There is him then spatter/blurriness around him. Making whatever there is in between (brando) the focal point.

thanks for the comments. Anyway to make it better?
Apoth3osis
07-03-2006, 12:59 PM
Dont get me wrong... its great work, (far better than my stuff) but i think the spatteryness on his (brando's) right, our left, of his shirt is too much.

But hey... Good stuff :D
Fayth
07-03-2006, 01:11 PM
the denise richards one is amazing. If that was in the sotw i would have so voted for you...but thats not important. I think I would like it more if it was a little smaller, but it is just awesome.

The other one is good too, but his face looks so weird. I think if you made the words stick out a little more on the edges it would look better.
Dekine
07-03-2006, 04:01 PM
Dont get me wrong... its great work, (far better than my stuff) but i think the spatteryness on his (brando's) right, our left, of his shirt is too much.

But hey... Good stuff :D

oh i wasn't barking at you. I was just questioning, but I can see what you are saying.

Thanks fayth, I think it's just the way the c4d's look coming across his face. And I'll see what I can do about the text
ICantLose
07-03-2006, 04:05 PM
Buttom one ... text needs to be clearer cant really see it at all

top ones ok... but that box that has the text on it could use some work also
Dekine
07-03-2006, 04:18 PM
top ones ok... but that box that has the text on it could use some work also

ok...any ideas?
ICantLose
07-03-2006, 04:36 PM
No... I havnt touched sigs in awhile... I make forums for people now...

And get payed for it :D
Dekine
07-03-2006, 04:40 PM
ok?

if you think of anything
just let me know
Dekine
07-03-2006, 04:49 PM
I actually like the godfather one more but because of the shear time and amount of layers (56) in the denise richards one. I figured I should current it. lol

here's an update on the godfather one. I took out the spatters on his face and added a little more color and brightened up the godfather text.
http://img398.imageshack.us/img398/597/godfathertagedit2rz.png

here's the original for comparison purposes:
http://img363.imageshack.us/img363/3436/godfathertag5ah.png
Sweet Pea
07-03-2006, 04:52 PM
I kinda like the first one, but the girl is kinda ugly. So I like the second one better. Nice job.
ICantLose
07-03-2006, 05:04 PM
HAHA IM ACTUALLY LOLING

Shes not ugly.
Kelpie PMS
07-03-2006, 05:37 PM
The Godfather one seems too distorted. I like the first one, nice job.
Fayth
07-03-2006, 06:16 PM
I actually like the godfather one more but because of the shear time and amount of layers (56) in the denise richards one. I figured I should current it. lol

here's an update on the godfather one. I took out the spatters on his face and added a little more color and brightened up the godfather text.
http://img398.imageshack.us/img398/597/godfathertagedit2rz.png

here's the original for comparison purposes:
http://img363.imageshack.us/img363/3436/godfathertag5ah.png

okay i like what you did with the face, but i think the text was better before. It's just hard to read whats on the outer edges...Funny thing is, even thought its so hard to read, I knew exactly what it said immediatly.
Dekine
07-03-2006, 11:19 PM
I kinda like the first one, but the girl is kinda ugly.

bwahaha you = loco in el cabasa
Apoth3osis
07-03-2006, 11:37 PM
bwahaha you = loco in el cabasa

"Im lauging right now"

I like the second one better, but I do agree that the text is hard to read... even though I knew xactly what it said :D .

Good Stuff
Miss_Insanio
07-04-2006, 03:38 AM
i like how u adjusted the godfather one but still think the splatter is just a bit to much... i can't suggest anything but lower that & i guess thats personal taste ;)
:.Carnage.:
07-04-2006, 08:53 AM
i feel like the godfather sig is damn near perfect, honestly the text was fine, imo before u changed it... the other one doesnt need to be touched at all its very sexy work....o btw (lol) Denise Richards is far from ugly!!!
Miss_Insanio
07-04-2006, 09:37 AM
she's gay :p (kidding)
Dekine
07-04-2006, 10:53 AM
yeah the spatter is fine in the first one imo but I do like the extra color I added. I'm going to adjust the text a very little bit.

Thanks for the comments.