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Raven085
06-29-2006, 01:37 PM
The hours seem longer
without your touch
the days go by so slow
when I want you this much
I want to feel your hands
gentle brush upon my skin
I want to breathe you deep within
I want to be back in your arms again

I'm sad when you're not around
when you're so far away..
when I want you to stay
cause having you makes me better

Just when I needed it the most
you saved me
just when I thought
I was about to wither away
you came to me
and opened my eyes
opened my heart
just when I thought it couldn't be done
you made me the one

I give you all of me
with devotion made of concrete
you made me see
you made me realize
you're just like me
I will forever be loyal to you
and there's nothing i wouldn't do
your name somehow got etched into my heart of stone
and now it's hard to believe that
I am no longer alone

Titan
06-29-2006, 07:19 PM
Awsome again, very much filled with emotion.

S w a k
06-29-2006, 09:24 PM
That was terrific. =)

I especially liked this part:

"Just when I needed it the most
you saved me
just when I thought
I was about to wither away
you came to me
and opened my eyes
opened my heart
just when I thought it couldn't be done
you made me the one"