Fatal Ray
03-05-2007, 12:47 AM
These took about 5 mins to write. Sorry if theres a couple swears in them I 4get if they do or not... so...Yea...
This first one was for my current gf, i told her I'd write her one :)
My Penguin Angel
There was once a girl,
Named Amber,
She walked with grace,
Without a trace,
Straight into my heart
As the days went by
We talked a lot
Slowly growing fonder…
Then one day
All that changed
And we started going out
Our love grew
Like a flower blossoming…
Then she came over once again
And we cuddled under a blankey
The feeling so nice…
The feeling so sweet
Wow such was a treat
We eventually kissed.
And then made out…
To have a sweet feeling…
Coarse throughout our veins.
Then I knew…
I
Had found…
My one and only…
Penguin Angel
Still reading? Thats good you enjoyed it I suppose :)
This one is called
Dreams
Some dreams are good,
some dreams are bad,
some dreams torture the person,
some dreams fuel the weak,
Dreams are a portal Which leads to many things,
an escape from the pain of reality,
some people dream of earthquakes,
some people dream of hurricanes,
tidal waves and pouring rain,
in dreams,
you can be lead to a place of peace
and happiness or it can lead you to a place
of Destruction, pain, payment,
and ridicule
some involve brutality among the enemy
some on the weak
much suffering is at stake
running, screaming, crying out into the depths
and darkness of the dream
die for your mistakes
be swallwed in your pain
as you twist and turn and suffer
you eventually awake and gather yourself to know
...it was but a dream...
By: Ray
YAY! Your still reading
This next one is called
The Shadows
The shadows consume,
the shadows fall,
the shadows progress over all,
the shadows hide,
the shadows show
the shadows hide
emotion wounds it has consumed
There I wait hiding in despair
hiding in pain
hiding and waiting
the shadows take
the shadows hold
the secrets from a broken soul
will there be a true savior
to join with the shadows
to mend the wounds of
the hidden broken, and shaken
saddened and depressed
dark soul that...resides in me
By: Ray
and finally this one I wrote for a halloween contest...and won it :)
Halloween Fright
On this day
once a year
your worst fright
your greatest fear
shall engulf you
try to run
try to escape
you hide in bed
but whats that creek
Look under your bed
get ready to run
because you are experiencing
the halloween fun
your fears of ghosts, ghoulies,
monsters, zombies
hellish creatures stalk the night
waiting to give you
a great big fright
You scream and run,
the small cry in vain
the strong are outmatched
the weak are already dead
you hide from the skeletons
and the boogieman too
but do not fret
for if you survive
the unleashment of hell
for the night it lasts you
will have treats galore
on halloween...
By: Ray
I thx you for reading this far. I write poems often and I usually get great credit for them. I'd love your feed back :).
This first one was for my current gf, i told her I'd write her one :)
My Penguin Angel
There was once a girl,
Named Amber,
She walked with grace,
Without a trace,
Straight into my heart
As the days went by
We talked a lot
Slowly growing fonder…
Then one day
All that changed
And we started going out
Our love grew
Like a flower blossoming…
Then she came over once again
And we cuddled under a blankey
The feeling so nice…
The feeling so sweet
Wow such was a treat
We eventually kissed.
And then made out…
To have a sweet feeling…
Coarse throughout our veins.
Then I knew…
I
Had found…
My one and only…
Penguin Angel
Still reading? Thats good you enjoyed it I suppose :)
This one is called
Dreams
Some dreams are good,
some dreams are bad,
some dreams torture the person,
some dreams fuel the weak,
Dreams are a portal Which leads to many things,
an escape from the pain of reality,
some people dream of earthquakes,
some people dream of hurricanes,
tidal waves and pouring rain,
in dreams,
you can be lead to a place of peace
and happiness or it can lead you to a place
of Destruction, pain, payment,
and ridicule
some involve brutality among the enemy
some on the weak
much suffering is at stake
running, screaming, crying out into the depths
and darkness of the dream
die for your mistakes
be swallwed in your pain
as you twist and turn and suffer
you eventually awake and gather yourself to know
...it was but a dream...
By: Ray
YAY! Your still reading
This next one is called
The Shadows
The shadows consume,
the shadows fall,
the shadows progress over all,
the shadows hide,
the shadows show
the shadows hide
emotion wounds it has consumed
There I wait hiding in despair
hiding in pain
hiding and waiting
the shadows take
the shadows hold
the secrets from a broken soul
will there be a true savior
to join with the shadows
to mend the wounds of
the hidden broken, and shaken
saddened and depressed
dark soul that...resides in me
By: Ray
and finally this one I wrote for a halloween contest...and won it :)
Halloween Fright
On this day
once a year
your worst fright
your greatest fear
shall engulf you
try to run
try to escape
you hide in bed
but whats that creek
Look under your bed
get ready to run
because you are experiencing
the halloween fun
your fears of ghosts, ghoulies,
monsters, zombies
hellish creatures stalk the night
waiting to give you
a great big fright
You scream and run,
the small cry in vain
the strong are outmatched
the weak are already dead
you hide from the skeletons
and the boogieman too
but do not fret
for if you survive
the unleashment of hell
for the night it lasts you
will have treats galore
on halloween...
By: Ray
I thx you for reading this far. I write poems often and I usually get great credit for them. I'd love your feed back :).